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Anoushka's avatar

Oh my GOSH this was so good!!! I love the multiple perspectives and timelines and the prophecy and the poem!! Counting down the days for June the 2nd! Thank you for posting this for free, I feel so lucky!! <3

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Olivia/O. J. Barré🧞‍♂️'s avatar

Oh, yayayayay!!! You are so welcome! I'm glad you like it, Anoushka. I debated about pricing and decided to go with free. I'm glad I did—comments like yours are payment enough. Thank you!! <3

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Wow, this is amazing! I love how you wove poetry into the first chapter, and the fact that anyone can subscribe and dive into the story is just amazing. I'm bookmarking this for later so I can dive deeper!

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Olivia/O. J. Barré🧞‍♂️'s avatar

Omg thank you so much, Bradley! Welcome to my crazy world, I’m so glad you’re here! Thank you for reading and commenting and sharing about it, too! I’m blown away!!

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Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

This is an ADVENTURE! omgosh I'm all in.

And the poetry at the beginning, chef's kiss 😘

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Olivia/O. J. Barré🧞‍♂️'s avatar

It most definitely IS AN ADVENTURE!! Yay, I'm so glad you're here and enjoyed it, Maryellen! Ahhh, the prophecy. So much juice in such a short little verse. It guides the way, though most won't notice. Such is the power of poetry, yes? I have something of yours queued up as well. And looking forward to it. Thanks for reading this and commenting. I soo appreciate it!

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Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

Omgosh, I notice details. It is who I am, so I'm all cozy & ready for more. Next Monday, I will be teaching, but anticipating a lunch time read 💗🙌

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Olivia/O. J. Barré🧞‍♂️'s avatar

That's so wonderful. I love this story and you give me new eyes with which to see. The next post is 2 chapters and already set to drop!

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Happy Nielsen's avatar

I love that you’re posting this for free! This story is so good and I’m loving all the intertwining timelines!

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Olivia/O. J. Barré🧞‍♂️'s avatar

Oh, excellent, Happy! I probably should’ve let people know about the multi-POVs. I’m glad you love them. I do, too! I debated whether to offer to paying peeps or keep it free and decided on the latter, at least for this first book.

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